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Sound:
Your narrator voice was extremely hard to hear, since it echoed. The chao's voices were like chipmunks, which was very annoying. Also, you blew into the microphone a lot.

Violence:
The only violence I saw was a red rectangle on the road.

Interactivity:
A play button.

Humor:
You attempted at jokes, but failed. Chipmunks saying "where are those fags" is not funny.

Overall:
Pretty bad. In my opinion, not worth watching. You may want to practice with your audio skills, since that was its greatest flaw. Echoing voices is better off left with those who can do it properly, and no one likes chipmunks.

Author's Response:

Graphics: I just learned how to use sprites.

Style:I've been trying to think of an idea for 1 month, but when I heard about the contest I rushed.

Sound:I was the narrator, I was everyone on the movie, I dicovered the high pinch effect so I decided to use it because the characters are children, and It's the first time I use my microphone.

Violence: that part was violence the red thing was pixelated blood(I know it sucks).

Interactivity:It's a movie, not a game

Humor: Yeah the "where the hell are those fags?" is not funny, The part I really liked was the happy happy joy joy song.

Overall: My second movie please go easy on it. Echoe voice I thought it was a good idea because it would sound like a narrator, high pinch voice is to sound like a little kid, and it's the first time I use my microphone.

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Score: 2

"Sorry."

submission: F!THS: Oompa Loompa

date: September 26, 2006

I just didn't find that funny.

Also, don't claim your superiority over other people when they have no Flashes and you have like, 20. They have a right to say anything about your movie without you having to crap all over them.

Author's Response:

I am simply stating the face that most people don't know how hard it is to make flash movies.

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Score: 1

"Bad."

submission: Sprite Movies 101

date: September 22, 2006

You're wrong, you do need smooth animation for people to give it a good score.

Author's Response:

Dude, you might have won five portal awards, but you're absolutely missing the friggin' point!1

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Score: 5

"Pretty good"

submission: The Hatchet

date: September 21, 2006

I read that book, haha. That wasn't bad, but the voice and graphics could've been better.

Author's Response:

I agree.
This is old, though. My new stuff has better graphics, crappier writing, and stays about the same on voice acting. THanks, though.

...And sorry for not responding to this untill 3 months afterwards.

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Score: 8

"Awesome, man"

submission: Line and Sinker

date: September 17, 2006

Congrats on front page and daily 4th. Although, there were some little annoyances that bugged me, cause I kinda have OCD (and no, I'm not talking about lyrics).

Things like you didn't trace the backgrounds, you either kept them as they are or just broke them apart. It looks like shit when it's zooming in or whatever.

Plus, the second time Wario passes the screen (I'm not sure on the first chorus, but it's there on the second) when he says "Look at me and don't forget", the black bars at the top and bottom open and reveal that the rest of his body is cut off and it's just a floating head. I know that's a duh, but you're supposed to hide that.

Still, good job dude. I know, I'm an anal asshole.